Why Clearly, Accurately and Concisely?
How?
Example:
「同僚の結婚祝いとしてチーム全体でプレゼントするもので何が喜んでもらえるかについて、
何か助言をお願いします」というメールを上司に出すとします。
< Mail 1 >
I am writing an email to ask you your advice
about what will delight Alice
as a present from our team to Alice for her wedding.
< Mail 2 >
I am emailing you to discuss what kind of a gift our team should give to Alice for her wedding
in order to please her.
Please give me your suggestion.