Why Clearly, Accurately and Concisely?
How?
Example:
「同僚の結婚祝いとしてチーム全体でプレゼントするもので何が喜んでもらえるかについて、
何か助言をお願いします」というメールを上司に出すとします。
< Mail 1 >
I am writing an email to ask you your advice
about what will delight Alice
as a present from our team to Alice for her wedding.
< Mail 2 >
I am emailing you to discuss what kind of a gift our team should give to Alice for her wedding
in order to please her.
Please give me your suggestion.
< Mail 3 >
I would like to discuss the following with you.
Our team plans to give Alice a gift for her wedding.
We are looking for
something that will please her and be useful at her new home.
If you have any suggestion on the gift, please let us know. Thank you.
How do you write this email?