Ex.1-3:
Writing Clearly, Accurately and Concisely

(Exercise on Style in Scientific Writing Ex.5 at Penn State Univ.)

Revise the following to make it clear, accurate and concise.
"The objective of this endeavor is to develop a commercialization strategy for solar energy systems by analyzing factors impeding early commercial projects (i.e., SOLAR ONE) and by identifying the potential actions that can facilitate the viability of the projects."
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